Senin, 01 April 2013

MY TWIN



Nama   : Ni Luh Denmacika Widiary
Nim     : 1112021098
Kelas   : 4E




MY TWIN

Now, I am nineteen years old, exact I will soon be twenty old. Age that could be considered mature, but it is true maturity cannot be measured simply by looking at age alone because I know, sometimes I like a child. I can still tell myself I am not mature because until now, I am hard to make a choice. Whatever is it. Because I think choosing is the most difficult and confusing action. Maybe this is characteristic that I want to change.
I have best friend, her name Ida Ayu Madriani Dewi. Two years ago, exactly the first time we studied in the same class, I do not know her because I was shy and had low self confident to talk to new people. Yet somehow the beginning, I knew her and talk to her. First time, she looks like a calm person. Why is that? Because she did not say not so many joke. I think maybe she was also an arrogant girl. Other reason, I also consider her moody, not because she was arrogant, but because sometimes I see her calm an sometimes ambitious.
As time went on, I with her in E class together. We always do assignment and travel together. Therefore, I know her family well and vice verse. I know that she respects to her parents. She is also diligent in her house because everyday she can do household alone, such as sweeping, watering, and feeding her father’s pets. Although sometimes she likes to put it off. It is clearly seen that she is a girl who loves her family.
After I know about her life, I am familiar with her character that I think is not good, she has no discipline of time. If I make an appointment with her, I must remind her. As I know, she is very sluggish. She thinks all things are relaxing without having to rush. I find out she is not calm girl as I have ever thought of before. She is talk active person, if she talks about her story, maybe my time will run out just to listen to her story. Also, she was a moody. Sometimes she is diligent, but sometimes she likes to delay the work. But behind it all, she is a loyal person. Loyal to her family, friends and boyfriend. I know that because I feel it. She will never leave her friends when her friends not good condition. She was able to maintain her relationship with her boyfriend for five years. It is not a short time. It needs patience and loyalty.
When I firstly knew her, I was shocked. Because many characteristics that I have same as hers. Not just one character, nut almost the entire of my characteristics are owned by her such as, delay to work, always feel relax, and moody. 
This is very interesting friendship because I feel I have twin. Our characteristic have not too much different. I hope, we still can be friendship.

2 komentar:

  1. Actually your writing is good enough but I found some mistake such as at the sentence " exact I will soon be twenty old" . I think it will be better if you use exactly than exact. and other mistake at sentence "exact I will soon be twenty old" I think less of years and the correct sentence is " exactly I will soon be twenty years old".
    Thank you very much !

    BalasHapus
  2. your writing is interesting, you write what you feel, it makes your writing fell nature.
    but, in the first paragraph, why you explain your self? where is your introduction? where is your thesis statement?

    BalasHapus