Selasa, 30 April 2013

Dewi, the Short Hair Girl



Nama   : Ni Luh Denmacika Widiary
Kelas   : 4E
Nim     : 1112021098

Dewi, the Short Hair Girl

            My friend, the best friend I have ever known. I call her Dewi. She is a submissive girl. She is girl who rarely leaves the house and always follows to the rule of her father. Everything is controlled by her father and his appearance as well. Indeed, sometimes this life must have rules, but not all existing laws must be obeyed because sometimes the rules should be implemented. As I suggest my friend to pick and choose the best hair style for her.
            Dewi is a submissive girl; always do her own household, feed her father’s pets and sometimes buy food for other family members. She was the third of four children. She has one older sister, one older brother, and one younger brother. Sometimes she also brings her young brother who was still in elementary school. Her job is so much at her home. Therefore, sometimes it can be difficult to set the time. Dewi is a tall and thin girl. She has brown eyes and long curly hair. Her body is typical for us, tall, skinny and long curly hair.
            I think she looks old with that hair style, I ask her to cut the long hair. I want to see her different from her previous appearance. I always saw her came to campus with a rush, that what made me think it is better if she cut her hair. I see that she has not proportional body. A small face shape is not suitable with long hair, plus she has body that tall and thin. When I told her, she thought it too; she wanted to cut hair and smoothed it. However obstacle for her father. Her father did not allow her to cut her long hair. Her father thought that girl’s hair is a crown of the girl. Yes indeed, girl is identical to long hair. But now, the world is growing, she must have beautiful hair. Beautiful does not mean long, but orderly and clean.
            Dewi kept thinking about a solution that I gave the hair cut. Finally she cut her long hair was. After she cut her hair, I also see the work of an employee of the salon for her. For me it is not too short, she cut it to shoulder. The curly hair was also straightened. What happened? Upon arriving at her home, her father did not scold her, her father praised Dewi. Like me, I saw her younger, fresher, and more beautiful. Agree with me, my classmates more like her with the short hair.

1 komentar:

  1. goo job enoo, the way you describe "Dewi" already clear enough so i can imagine how "dewi" look like :p
    the content is also already good, it focus on the appearance of "Dewi" in new hair cut,so interesting :D

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