Nama : Ni Luh Denmacika
Widiary
Nim :
1112021098
Kelas : 4E
My Balinese House
Everyone
has a dream, I have a dream too. Dream is something that is expected to occur
in the future. Start from the simple dream, i will do it can be a excellent
dream. They cannot to blame if you have a dream, because everyone want to dream
of being the best. One of my dreams were house,
I would like to own house. For me, the house must be the comfortable
place do everything. I want have a house be something place which interesting
for my family and me.
I
want my house with Balinese style. In my imagine, my house must have temple,
garden, special room, bale-balean and the other about Balinese culture. I do
not like minimalize house because that is not interesting for me. I want the
gate is made of solid wood with carvings and an eagle statue on the top.
Eagle’s eyes as if turned to anyone who comes to visit. I want all the rooms in
my house later carving. And I want to make a special place for the gamelan. I
hope my children can play gamelan or dance. Other than that i want to make a
living room with Balinese style too. There will put Barong picture and Tari
Pendet picture on the wall. Because Tari Pendet picture is a symbol to welcome
guests.
In
my garden, i just want plants some grass and many flowers. I want my garden
looks so beautiful and clean. In my house, i will put many things about Balinese
culture. Because i want all people interesting about the items of the house from
inside or outside. Although the places apart but all organized and looks
beautiful place with the unique of Balinese culture. I want everyone who stay
in my house fee comfortable.
So,
my dream is want make house with Balinese style. I hope all achieve. I have
unique house and stay with my beloved family. Besides it is also keep Balinese
culture. Because Balinese culture is very interesting.
hello eno..
BalasHapusfrom your writing i know that you love bali culture so much. i am proud of you because in the modern era lika now you still expect to have a traditional house complete with traditional situation. But i find some mistake in your writing in use "but and although". it happen in the third paraghrap you mush chose one of the word.
over all i like you idea in adding traditional style in your dream house.
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I have same opinion with you, I like Balinese culture so much. because we as young generation of Bali should keep our tradition. let's save our culture together ;)
BalasHapusover all your writing is good enough :p